Thursday, November 5, 2009

diamonds in the shadows

1. On page 133 jared was up set because he said there is somthing wrong with this family... and he was the only one that noticed it because he worries about every thang... and he thanks every one is bad.........

4. i thank alake changed the most because at the beggining of the story she was quiet and didnt want to eat that moch... but at the end she talks alot more then she did... And she will eat ...... but she stell thought she had nobody to love.. but that changed when she got the puppy. when she got the puppy she finally had somthang to love. but then that changed because she wouldnt have the dog for moch longer...

1 comment:

  1. Do you really think Jared thinks everyone is bad?

    I agree that Alake changed the most. Good comments. Please watch your spelling.

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